Brilliant! DH leaves so many questions unanswered, and I love how you address so many of the issues by letting the women talk. Your choice of characters is great; there's such a variety, and you do each character justice in her section.
The sections that impressed me the most were the two that addressed two Minerva moments that made me stumble when I came across them in the book. Your take on Minerva's reaction to the Cruciatus, the disgust, and the decision to step aside ring so plausible, and her own shades of grey then come out perfectly by the ending line of the Pansy section (and the fact that you focused your Minerva vignette just on the Cruciatus, not on the Imperius she speaks. I found it effective and telling that she didn't reflect on that as well.)
And Dolores's image that helps her conjure the Patronus, Petunia and her bars of soap ... and last but not least, the quotes as titles, especially given that the women get to speak so little in DH.
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The sections that impressed me the most were the two that addressed two Minerva moments that made me stumble when I came across them in the book. Your take on Minerva's reaction to the Cruciatus, the disgust, and the decision to step aside ring so plausible, and her own shades of grey then come out perfectly by the ending line of the Pansy section (and the fact that you focused your Minerva vignette just on the Cruciatus, not on the Imperius she speaks. I found it effective and telling that she didn't reflect on that as well.)
And Dolores's image that helps her conjure the Patronus, Petunia and her bars of soap ... and last but not least, the quotes as titles, especially given that the women get to speak so little in DH.
Excellent all around!