http://blueinkedpalm.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] blueinkedpalm.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] femgenficathon 2010-08-02 12:20 am (UTC)

I don't know this fandom, but I thought this story was very intriguing; you captured a very interesting glimpse of a powerful woman at this stage of her life. I liked the use of the tree metaphor, and that first sentence--Quietly, calmly, even gracefully, the boy thought. Fran was dying. Nicely written and very fascinating.

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