Chilling and brilliant how you draw the parallel between her design to impose her view of order on Hogwarts and her kitten collection! An intense read, all the more so for the way you bring across her voice and her ideas. It's exactly what makes Dolores the creepiest and most realistic villain (male or female) in the books for me: her saccharine insistence that she only lives to help, the way she wriggles her way to the top by knowing exactly on whom to step and whom to bow to, the cruelty under the icing -- and you capture that exactly.

Great piece!