ext_37912 ([identity profile] avari-elf.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] femgenficathon 2005-08-29 03:54 am (UTC)

Wow... I really liked this. I'm a sucker for all Evan sisters story, but this one is really good. I liked the way it started with Lily's first use of magic, and how it frightened Petunia, and the bicycle scene brought a nice balance to it.

I always wonder what sort of parents the Evans were, to let such animosity develop between sisters. Because I imagine Petunia wasn't very nice, but for such a family discord to happen, I imagine Lily and the parents were far from faultless either.

The way Lily threatened Petunia with her wand... no, just no. I know my mother would have smacked me for that, even if my sister had been awful to me.

The last scene was really heart-breaking. Poor Harry, caught once again in a feud that should have nothing to do with him.

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