This felt so very real...the interactions between sisters, the jealousy. I loved the detail of the tea set and its color, it took me right back to being a little girl (I can remember mine with really surprising clarity). The bike, too, the way a little sister would want the older's things...

"A girl as pretty as you doesn't need to do so much school, do you?" Mr Dursley asked, seeming genuinely confused.

This too, felt real, especially that he meant well while he said it...that whole scene with the Dursleys was quietly heartbreaking, and then to follow it up with the argument and nastiness in the kitchen. So very well done!

Great story!