I've been dying for a fic update -- and what a fic it was. Great job, as usual.

I love the different angles of depth. Ultimately, Ronon and Teyla were right in their perspectives, I love the line "Ronon had challenged her - and Teyla was not so prideless as to not feel both admiration and exasperation with her team-mate."

The subtle John/Teyla was great.

I es[ecially appreciate the realism. The marines gave her a hard time -- but I'm glad they overcame whatever prejudices they had about a 'woman/alien' being in command, and gave her the respect she deserves.