ext_67711 ([identity profile] sambethe.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] femgenficathon 2006-09-19 05:18 pm (UTC)

Ahh, I'm sorry I sat on this for a few days before I read it as it is quite lovely. I like the hardened edge to Rosmerta's voice. I like that you don't back down from it and try to soften it. I like that she's the one other women (or men) go to but that she doesn't strike me as maternal.

The end of her conversation with Lily about Remus and Peter - *sniff*.

And the snippet about Tonks and her patronus gives me much to think about. I love the concept of that change signifying a much deeper change. It makes a lot of sense. I'm unsure, however, if JKR would describe it as meaning such. Or maybe I'm just bitter that she seems to use it to announce a change that to me feels flippant. No matter, I quite like how you describe it. Seems fitting.

Nicely done! :)

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