I'm glad the feedback was helpful. I, too, have a tendancy to wrap things up perhaps more definatively than is necessary, so I understand completely. Looking at it again, yes the mirrored structure works nicely even if the ending text isn't strictly necessary.
Happy to have read it. If other genfics out there are as good as this I may have to expand my horizons some!
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Happy to have read it. If other genfics out there are as good as this I may have to expand my horizons some!