Thank you so very much! Your comment literally had me dancing around the flat. :-)
I love to hear that you enjoyed the writing to follow even the slow pace at the beginning - I was worrying about the slow start, afraid that it would be too much until the action finally started to speed up.
the way your Voldemort uses his charisma and strength of personality to hold and manipulate Bella
Yay - you made my day with that bit! This was just what I wanted, focus on how he messes with her mind and how she reacts to it. Voldemort's logic was so clear to me when I wrote him - I always thought that he must have messed with Bella's mind in a truly awful way for her to follow him without ever questioning him again.
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I love to hear that you enjoyed the writing to follow even the slow pace at the beginning - I was worrying about the slow start, afraid that it would be too much until the action finally started to speed up.
the way your Voldemort uses his charisma and strength of personality to hold and manipulate Bella
Yay - you made my day with that bit! This was just what I wanted, focus on how he messes with her mind and how she reacts to it. Voldemort's logic was so clear to me when I wrote him - I always thought that he must have messed with Bella's mind in a truly awful way for her to follow him without ever questioning him again.