Wow, I love this! I love how believable every character's pov is -- not only have you provided an explanation for McGonagall's behaviour (which bothered me a lot when I read the book), but you've also given characters such as Petunia and Umbridge humanity and understandable motivations, even as they're being their canonically unsympathetic selves. My favourite section is probably Pansy's -- I loved the way you've tackled 'the Slytherin problem'. Thank you!
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Date: 2010-07-29 09:56 pm (UTC)