She winced as she remembered attempting to scry into the boys' showers and being caught by McGonagall; fortunately, no one, not even Ron or Harry, had ever suspected she'd been the one to lose so many house points. *cackles madly* Naughty Hermione!
After all, if the future were as clear as that, then prophecies would make sense and would not be phrased like riddles and only understood after the fact. Oooh, I like this. It's true, yet slightly snarky, capturing the straighforwardness of Hermione's brain and subsequent attitude toward Divination.
God, this really is powerful, you know. Hermione's voice is clear through this, and it flows with a very tense drive that works perfectly.
Traveling backwards in time felt somewhat like having all of ones bones removed and then being sucked down a drain. Small beta point... Should be one's with the apostrophe.
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Date: 2005-08-24 09:36 pm (UTC)After all, if the future were as clear as that, then prophecies would make sense and would not be phrased like riddles and only understood after the fact. Oooh, I like this. It's true, yet slightly snarky, capturing the straighforwardness of Hermione's brain and subsequent attitude toward Divination.
God, this really is powerful, you know. Hermione's voice is clear through this, and it flows with a very tense drive that works perfectly.
Traveling backwards in time felt somewhat like having all of ones bones removed and then being sucked down a drain. Small beta point... Should be one's with the apostrophe.