That is a gorgeous beginning. Because it seems so simple, but... five rooms? So right away I was pulled in.
and how odd that her father wouldn't notice the shelves, only his dead wife? <3 <3
Gah, and your turns of phrase in this are just outstanding:
Luna was a Ravenclaw before she was Sorted.
and …a Ravenclaw's curiosity, more than any other House's, was deadly, if piqued.
There are just all these elements of interesting characterization, presented as fact, if you will, that make this such an engaging read. ♥
and the timing thing? Of course there would be an exact figure to the motionlessness.
Oh, god, this was beautiful. Seriously. I love when people write Luna, and this was so beautifully on. THank you for linking this. This will stay with me for a while. ♥
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Date: 2007-01-24 02:23 am (UTC)That is a gorgeous beginning. Because it seems so simple, but... five rooms? So right away I was pulled in.
and how odd that her father wouldn't notice the shelves, only his dead wife? <3 <3
Gah, and your turns of phrase in this are just outstanding:
Luna was a Ravenclaw before she was Sorted.
and …a Ravenclaw's curiosity, more than any other House's, was deadly, if piqued.
There are just all these elements of interesting characterization, presented as fact, if you will, that make this such an engaging read. ♥
and the timing thing? Of course there would be an exact figure to the motionlessness.
Oh, god, this was beautiful. Seriously. I love when people write Luna, and this was so beautifully on. THank you for linking this. This will stay with me for a while. ♥