Oh. Oh wow. This was amazing. I loved how real Sabriel and Touchstone sounded. I love how you show Sabriel worrying about the "slippery slope," and how Touchstone proposes in the most... unromantic way possible. It's very funny. I would really love to hear more from your Sabriel and Touchstone. You really seem to have captured their voices, concerns, and hopes.
Well done.
(Aside: I loved that you have Hedge here. Awesomeness personified.)
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Date: 2006-09-14 04:59 am (UTC)Well done.
(Aside: I loved that you have Hedge here. Awesomeness personified.)