femgenficathon

Wow, what wonderful feedback! I'm so glad all the layers came across, and each segment worked together for you like I hoped they would. I definitely see what you mean about the ending, and it almost did end with the line to Ginny! I went back and forth on it a few times, and eventually decide to mirror the structure at the beginning, with a little bit of something before and after the Ginny segments. But thank you for the critique; I'll keep in mind in the future that the little codas like that aren't always necessary. :)

Thanks so much for reading, especially if Genfic isn't usually your thing! (I don't write much of it, either, but this Fest always pops out at me). :)