Argh, that was beautiful. You've caught the exact tone of the books, and it's so wonderful to see Susan's reasoning, somehow justified yet flawed. I can definitely see Susan being jealous of Jill.
You've got me wanting to read more Narnia fanfic now!
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Date: 2007-08-08 02:34 pm (UTC)You've got me wanting to read more Narnia fanfic now!