I love how perfectly you've captured Hermione's voice. She just couldn't even be satisfied with herself, could she? The indirect characterisation of Ron is also wonderful -- you've built on canon and rendered an adult version that makes perfect sense. I also like your explanation for Harry and Ginny's attitudes in the epilogue.
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Date: 2007-09-30 06:58 pm (UTC)And, hee! Albus Potter in Slytherin. Love it.