"Carefully constructed" indeed! As one who knows how you fought with this, I must say the final result is stunning! The addition of Fleur and Luna was brilliant and gave the whole thing a nice counterpoint as well as a tied-togetherness - if that makes sense.
Tonks made me weep. The line ...a Scotland part of France. You know. With sheep." made me laugh as hard as Minerva, and I think this may be the first time I've (almost) liked Narcissa.
Thanks for all the hard work you put into the story - it turned out brilliantly.
(The rearrangement of McGonagall's part is perfect.)
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Date: 2007-10-04 05:06 am (UTC)Tonks made me weep. The line ...a Scotland part of France. You know. With sheep." made me laugh as hard as Minerva, and I think this may be the first time I've (almost) liked Narcissa.
Thanks for all the hard work you put into the story - it turned out brilliantly.
(The rearrangement of McGonagall's part is perfect.)