Oh my god. That is brilliant. I love your ideas about Carmen's motivation, and the matter of fact way you treat the insanity of the entire premise. She stole Old Faithful! She's practicing to steal the Burj Dubai! Crazy, but if anyone could pull it off, it would be Carmen.
The inclusion of the song lyrics is a lovely touch.
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Date: 2008-10-02 06:13 am (UTC)The inclusion of the song lyrics is a lovely touch.
*basks in childhood memories*