Oh, my God. There's something that just grabs me about this fic. You capture her desperation perfectly and I have tears in my eyes. Her thoughts about how James is dying downstairs and her knowledge about when he is dead, the one millisecond that she considers just hiding; it's real and it's very powerful. Thank you for writing this.
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Date: 2005-08-18 12:18 am (UTC)